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Kelly Trost's avatar

Hello Be and Amit,

this is absolutely beautiful. Your words weave and wind through and around the other's words, beautifully coalescing to form this artful, living poem. What a joy to read!

Amit The Storyteller's avatar

Thanks for being here friend 💌

Kelly Trost's avatar

Oh, thank you too, Amit! I love having you as my friend. I’m sorry I haven’t been around much lately. Going through a lot of hardship right now. But I’m trying very hard to return. I had just left you another comment and part of it said I want to read more of your poetry as soon as I can. Thank you for always being here.

Be Budding's avatar

Thank you, Kelly 🤍

Petra's avatar

So soft and beautiful. A separation dissolving into unity, and everything becoming whole again. <3

Be Budding's avatar

Thank you so much, Petra, I'm glad it resonates.

Petra's avatar

<3

Christopher Van Name's avatar

What true, endless love is. Beautiful.

Be Budding's avatar

Thank you, Christopher. I like your perspective on it.

Kate Smedley's avatar

This is so uplifting, I love the images of the clouds flaunting their beauty and the miniature rainbow crystals, and ultimately clouds and sky becoming one, quite magical.

Be Budding's avatar

Glad you like it, Kate.

Dean M's avatar

Oh so graceful and lovable 🫶🏼🫶🏼🫶🏼

Be Budding's avatar

Thank you, Dean.

Jay's avatar

This really flows. I really like it. I really like the blending aspect to be, come, the one.

Be Budding's avatar

Happy you’re loving it, Jay.

Words about things and stuff's avatar

Thank you. I loved this. Perfect for a rainy day. Now if only we could get a rainbow later.

Be Budding's avatar

A rainbow would be a wonderful gift.

Vicki Portune Hughes's avatar

Without the sky, where would clouds live? 🩵lovely joint venture

Be Budding's avatar

Aww yes, beautiful insight!

Mark Decker's avatar

Touching. Two becoming one to understand and reveal the beauty in each.

Amit The Storyteller's avatar

Thanks for reading and sharing your words Mark ✨️

Be Budding's avatar

Yes, thank you, Mark 🙏

Brandi Lynn's avatar

Your interpretation of the sky’s shift from frustration to awe beautifully captures how we often only find true expansiveness when we stop resisting the very things that seem to be obscuring our view. Lovely collab ✨

Be Budding's avatar

Thank you so much for this beautiful reflection, Brandi 🙏

Laura Lynch's avatar

Wow! I love this! I feel like there is a deep lesson in this!

Gabrielle Mullarkey's avatar

I feel there's an important distinction between hinting at a denoument the reader can flex their imagination against and simply ignoring a big reveal that everyone's on tenterhooks for, but then again, I haven't read this particular book so wouldn't like to be unfair.

Be Budding's avatar

Book? 😅